Wednesday, September 16, 2009

How my paper changed

There is almost nothing about my paper that stayed the same. My topic even changed slightly. My rewrite is much stronger though.

1 comment:

  1. Yeah, my overall message altered as I continued to edit my essay. I mean it's still the essay it was before, but twice as long(3 pages!!) and I just found an opening to convey a different message.

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